setting:
the story took place during summer at the beach.
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Plot:
The story is actually about jerry that just loved swimming.And they went to a holiday with the mother.There was a day he decided to go to the mother without the mothers permission and he came across big boys that were also good at swimming,he just wanted to be as good as them,because at once this big boys swimmed in the deep ocean and stayed under for so long that he even got worried that something happened to them and it happened to be that they came from the other side of the beach. He decided to do the same before they go back to their home, he knew that he had to pracise his breathing,he did so that caused him to bleed to much,but yet that did not stop him,he once escaped and he swimmed.he actually made it through and he was proud of himself.
Character:
Jery had the courage to swim through the tuinnel although he was afraid of dying.He had so much pride that he pushed himself to dive off the rock and swim through the tunnel with the bigger boys.Jerry was a young boy who was just eleven years old. He was a good swimmer just like a fish. He was not discouraged by anything or noyhing could stop him from swimming through the tunnel. He was a very brave boy.
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